Pages 27,28,29 text edit

These are the Pages with redone text. ALL text on these pages was retyped, but only some of it was changed. These edits seem more inline and realistic to Trixie’s character to me.


2 responses

  1. zedthefed

    Yeah, I agree with re-doing the pages. But you know…even these simple text edits are a hell of a lot better than before.

    June 13, 2011 at 10:14 PM

  2. kanamag

    Re-reading the logs of the chat, it was said we weren’t going to use these pages, or at least cut some panels out. Reason being that trixie’s reactions and actions were totally out of character. Her facial expressions are totally not what we wanted.

    EDIT: also, just noticed a typo on the word “Definitley”. Should be “Definitely” 😛

    June 12, 2011 at 10:38 PM